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On a day very still, very cold, very pale,
I see the shadows gather up her shape
In the frost-bitten garden where she paces, alone,
Her long black tresses stirring in the ghost of a breeze
As she wraps a cloak of midnight velvet
About her tall and slender frame,
Her bare feet crushing the snow!
She laughs at the cold, her eyes glittering
As she casts a spell of enchantment weird
Over her beloved town--
Upon each roof-top,
Imps and bogles dance, picking their noses
And smearing the results on the frostéd window-panes
Whilst a herd of screaming phookas galumph madly
Up and down the twilit streets
As ghosts and vampires rise solemnly from ancient tombs
To attend her Birthday Revels...
For the beauteous and most visionary :iconxxtaintedlipsxx: on the occasion of her birthday!!!:heart:
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Shirley-Agnew-Art Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Great job Jeff, I really enjoyed that! :-)
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:thanks:
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Skaramine Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tis a wonderful gift!
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She was tickled pink! :)
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:iconskaramine:
Skaramine Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She should be. :D
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RebelFlame-sama Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the mischievous tone this takes. Very imp-like. 
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsneakyfelix: Hee-hee, you noticed!  Thank you!
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RebelFlame-sama Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :)
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DarkSaxeBleu Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:flyinghamsterofdoom:You got me there right about around ''picking their noses'' =P bit!!!+Gift+ Icon for Nieckia 
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao: I'd forgotten about that line!
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nevs89 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Jeff, you create such astounding visuals. I need the collected poetic works of Chaosfive55! :iconlovesplz:
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
One day I'll have to publish them! :D
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nevs89 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Yay! I would really like that! BTW, I saw your books on Goodreads.com. I have to rate the Bride of Chaos and give it a review.
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!! :D Please do so--word of mouth is the best advertising, after all...
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AppliedPhilosopher Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
This is awesome! I can't imagine a better poem to wish Shavaughn a happy birthday! This is one of those poems I read, and I wish I'd written it...
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: That is high praise, thank you very much!!
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XxTaintedLipsxX Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awee thanks so much!!! :hug: I love it!!! :hug:
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyaayplz: Glad to hear it! Have a very fun day!!!:party:
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Ameymoo Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow eerie and fits the photo. I gotta admit I'm envious of her cutenss
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, hush! :aww: You are every bit as lovely!!
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Ameymoo Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Am not :<
Having said that I've noticed some guys looking at me down the street. Most of the time I look homeless!
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Are too! And those guys looking at you down the street would agree, whether you look homeless or not! ;)
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Ameymoo Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't feel like it. I was bullied alot in primary and secondary school people saying I was ugly so I began to believe it.
I'm tempted to 'accidently' drop my phone number by them XDDD
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: Remember the story of the "ugly" duckling, who turned out to be a swan!
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:iconameymoo:
Ameymoo Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's hope it's true for me huh?
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've already seen the proof in your prom photo!;)
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